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An Appearance of Goodness: A Pride and Prejudice Variation (Excessively Diverted) Kindle Edition
Can a Derbyshire meeting lead to love or will Pemberley be plunged into mystery?
In the rainy summer of 1812, Mr Darcy returns to Pemberley with a large party in the hope that coming home will help him recover from his disappointment. He lost Elizabeth Bennet’s good opinion, but Darcy did all he could to rectify his errors. Meanwhile, Elizabeth hopes that travelling with a newly-wed Jane and Bingley will raise her spirits and distract her from thoughts of Darcy.
When a misunderstanding causes the Bingley party and Darcy’s to spend a fortnight together at Pemberley, both Elizabeth and Darcy wonder if the other could love them. When the season’s wet and cold weather causes flooding throughout Derbyshire, Darcy’s attention reluctantly shifts from his guests–and Elizabeth–to managing the tragedy.
But when someone drowns and Darcy refuses to believe their death was an accident from the storm, he and Elizabeth must work together to uncover the truth before his houseguests leave, and before anyone else gets hurt.
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Content note: mature content, mild violence.
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateOctober 1, 2022
- File size1.8 MB
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"With romance, drama, and a murder mystery, there is something for everyone. Moll explores another side, a kinder side, to the closed-off Mr. Darcy so get ready to have your heart warmed! [...] Heather Moll has created a story that made me grin with glee, cringe with second-hand embarrassment and hold my breath in suspense. I can't ask more from a book. "
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- ASIN : B09T3R9JPZ
- Publisher : Excessively Diverted Press (October 1, 2022)
- Publication date : October 1, 2022
- Language : English
- File size : 1.8 MB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 324 pages
- Page numbers source ISBN : 1735186694
- Best Sellers Rank: #43,247 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #66 in Romance Adaptation eBooks
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Heather Moll is an avid reader of mysteries and biographies with a masters in information science. She found Jane Austen later than she should have and made up for lost time by devouring her letters and unpublished works, joining JASNA, and spending too much time researching the Regency era. She is the author of An Appearance of Goodness, An Affectionate Heart, Nine Ladies, and A Hopeful Holiday among others. She lives with her husband and son, and struggles to balance all of the important things, like whether or not to buy groceries or stay home and write.
Connect with her on social media and subscribe to her newsletter for a free story. https://www.heathermollauthor.com
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Customers find the book engaging and well-written. They describe it as an enjoyable read with interesting characters and chemistry between them. The story offers a fresh take on Pride and Prejudice, with clever storytelling and a well-paced courtship.
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Customers enjoy the romance in the book. They find the mystery engaging and well-paced, with plenty of intrigue and twists. The story takes place at Pemberley, some months after Jane and Mr. Rochester's marriage.
"...people of Lambton after a devastating storm, but the mystery didn’t detract from the story and actually fit quite well into the story...." Read more
"...There are a few new characters who are cleverly interwoven in this story to enhance Elizabeth’s realization of the man Fitzwilliam Darcy truly is..." Read more
"...for its beautiful writing, original plot, nail biting mystery and intrigue, slow burn romance, witty (and Austenesque) dialogue, and a total lack of..." Read more
"...inner doubts a few more times than I wished, but the story is ultimately very satisfying. I will look for more works by this author." Read more
Customers enjoy the book's readability. They find it enjoyable, delightful, and a fun read. The author keeps the reader engaged with intriguing plot elements like murder, secrets, and love. Overall, readers describe the story as satisfying and a good long read.
"...But I truly loved this variation and would happily read it again. Definitely recommend. 10/10" Read more
"...However, the remarkable and satisfying element in this variation is how much affection and love Elizabeth felt for Mr. Darcy before he proposed the..." Read more
"...What can I say? This was very, very good, and I do not give five stars without reason. It made me look up more books from the same author." Read more
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Customers find the story well-written with a perfectly paced courtship. They appreciate the smart storytelling and characterizations of new characters. The book offers a fresh, well-written take on Pride and Prejudice with intrigue, slow burn romance, and witty dialogue.
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Customers enjoy the character development. They find the courtship interesting.
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- Reviewed in the United States on December 12, 2022I loved this variation. It had all the makings of a truly 5 star book. The writing was excellent as it always is by Miss Moll, but I was again struck by how very true to character she writes ODC and how wonderfully she tells a story. This starts with Lizzy following the Bingley’s on vacation after a few months of marriage. Elizabeth has rejected Darcy in Kent and all is true to the original except when Bingley returns it only brings him and not Darcy. So Lizzy has not seen Darcy since Kent.
The story really gets interesting when they all meet at Pemberley for a brief stop before eventually going on to his family in Scarborough. At the house party you have all the Bingley’s and Hursts, Darcy’s, Elizabeth and three new characters which I felt went very well with the story.
While at the house party Elizabeth’s heart and feelings are slowly turned toward Darcy. And Darcy is consumed with trying to make sure he shows Elizabeth he’s listened to her reproves and is worthy of her love if he can engage her heart. I loved the way their romance unfolded and how supporting characters helped (and didn’t help) them along. In true P&P fashion, ODC finally reunite and it is lovely to read their chemistry, their love, everything! Heather Moll was also able to include much humor despite the story turning from a slightly angsty story about couple finding love in each other to a murder mystery.
Now normally most “murder mystery” variations I’ve read are over the top, wildly outrageous and have very convenient endings with the characters not much affected by the tragedy. This one however felt very true and real for our characters and not contrived at all. Maybe it was because it was in the midst of true tragedy for Pemberley’s master and for the people of Lambton after a devastating storm, but the mystery didn’t detract from the story and actually fit quite well into the story. Even the aftermath and the epilogue felt very real in terms of how people might feel after truly experiencing such a tragedy.
I will only add that if you like truly clean variations this is not the book for you. Darcy and Lizzy do anticipate their wedding vows (twice and have several other cute moments together) but to them, they are already married in their eyes and see each other as husband and wife. So if that offends you don’t read it. But I truly loved this variation and would happily read it again. Definitely recommend. 10/10
- Reviewed in the United States on April 21, 2023When Elizabeth Bennet is forced under special circumstances to see in close proximity the true character of the man she rejected in Hunsford, her feelings takes a swift drastic change. While Mr. Darcy, faced with the realization that he cannot live life without Elizabeth Bennet, is resolved to show her he can be a better man for her, if only the timing is right. But circumstances and events surrounding him makes it difficult to declare himself.
There are a few new characters who are cleverly interwoven in this story to enhance Elizabeth’s realization of the man Fitzwilliam Darcy truly is and her growing esteem, respect and eventually, love for him.
However, the remarkable and satisfying element in this variation is how much affection and love Elizabeth felt for Mr. Darcy before he proposed the second time, and how she was all too willing to go all the way to prove her love to the man she previously declared as the last man she will ever marry. Many of the lovers’ thoughts and hidden personal feelings are expressed enough to affect this reader, and their exchanges are heartwarming and romantic.
The author is rather wordy though, and detailed on inconsequential matters. In other words, this variation could have been shorter without taking away its essence. But the details describing places and events are appreciated.
- Reviewed in the United States on May 29, 2024In a sea of unending P&P variations, this one stands out clearly for its beautiful writing, original plot, nail biting mystery and intrigue, slow burn romance, witty (and Austenesque) dialogue, and a total lack of repeat from P&P. I love variations that are canon up to where they begin, then splinter off. A little adventure— even better. This one also has some very romantic intimate scenes, but they are not overly graphic and could easily be skipped if you wanted to.
I also loved the addition of the new characters and the lack of Wickham, Mrs Bennet, Collins and Lady Catherine as villains. Had enough of them, thank you!
If I could give it 6 stars, I would. Definitely in my top 5 fav variations, and I’ve read a lot.
- Reviewed in the United States on October 1, 2024I loved this inventive and engaging murder mystery set in a P&P variation. The plot is intriguing and the characters are endearing. The main characters circle around their inner doubts a few more times than I wished, but the story is ultimately very satisfying. I will look for more works by this author.
- Reviewed in the United States on March 23, 2024I enjoy this author and look forward to her books, but this one was just not for me. To begin with, the premise that Elizabeth and Jane are growing apart because now that Jane is married, she prefers the company of Mrs. Hurst was difficult to believe. Bingley and Jane are minor characters in this tale, but no others from Elizabeth's family make an appearance. The mystery plot was interesting at first, but it did not move along very well. Most egregiously was the characterization of Elizabeth as a seductress and the several explicit scenes of her and Darcy together before they were married or even had made their engagement public. I can't believe that she would be that reckless or that Darcy would be that disrespectful to anticipate the marriage vows before even making their engagement public or asking for Mr. Bennett's permission for the marriage. It was so out of character for both of them that I had to skim the rest of the book just to see how it all resolved. I can't really recommend it for those reasons.
- Reviewed in the United States on January 8, 2025This was so well written. More than anything I LOVED the description of how Darcy was with his friends when at home and relaxed in an environment he knows.
What can I say? This was very, very good, and I do not give five stars without reason. It made me look up more books from the same author.
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- CFraReviewed in Canada on June 17, 2023
5.0 out of 5 stars Another excellent plot and book from Heather Moll
What a great author! I am glad to have found her work.
This was another well written story, full of intrigue and dramatic situations, but also composed of deeply intricate characters and lovely scenes.
Elizabeth ends up visiting Pemberley with Charles and Jane, Caroline, the Hurts, and some other friends from Darcy: a widow, her brother, and another friend. Although she was distraught at first, she got to know his personality better and after a few days, the awkwardness started to give way to admiration. After a violent thunderstorm, flooding around Pemberley and in the villages created a catastrophic situation for Darcy to manage. Charles and his family decided to leave and Elizabeth stayed with the widow and Georgiana. At that point, Elizabeth already felt for him and was sad to leave him behind in the midst of the crisis. Worse yet, someone died and the only people who could have killed them was one of his friends. While investigating the murder and tending to the crisis, Elizabeth and Darcy come to an understanding (how great was that part!).
I loved how decisive Elizabeth was in this book, how she wasn’t afraid of showing him passion and love since she trusted and wanted him. I also really liked Mrs Lanyon’s personality and the author’s take on prejudice in that society.
All characters were similar in personality to the original story (even though Jane wasnt so attuned to her sister), which I always appreciate.
The book was also well edited. Sure, the predictable outcome of it being one friend or the other to commit murder was perhaps simple, but it was well written, so it was still very interesting.
Loved it!
- R. ZivReviewed in the United Kingdom on March 16, 2024
5.0 out of 5 stars highly enjoyable
This was a great read that I started and finished in a single day! Loved the new characters, the gothic style weather and of course the murder mystery.
- MelReviewed in Germany on December 5, 2023
5.0 out of 5 stars An appearance of goodness
In summer, after he was refused by Elizabeth in Kent, Darcy goes home to Pemberley to recover from his disappointment. He is accompanied by some friends and awaits his friend Bingley's arrival.
In the meantime Elizabeth travels to Scarborough with Jane and her new husband Bingley, not knowing that they are first also going to stay at Pemberley. When Bingley and his family arrive it is obvious that Darcy had not known about Elizabeth travelling with Bingley, but one thing he knows now for certain - he still loves Elizabeth. Elizabeth's opinion about Darcy soon changes to admiration and both are secretly hoping for a chance of mutual love.
But that tragedy strikes. First never ceasing rain causes a flood and then a person is found dead - and it seems that the death was not an accident.
Darcy must now face the damages caused by the flood and tries, with Elizabeth's help, to investigate in the case of the death.
Might his houseguests be part of the mystery? And will he, besides all these other events, be able to reach an understanding with Elizabeth?
The book of the author Heather Moll is a second chance romance and, like all her books, very well written. In this book Darcy and Elizabeth need to solve a mystery together. I like it very much when they have to work together and are, in the process, able to discover how good they work together when have the same aim and that they are indeed very well matched. The mystery was thrilling and captivating and only revealed by events beyond ODC's control. For them and the reader the solution of the mystery was not obvious. I like that very much because you as reader are able to think with them about the case, come to conclusions and guess about the possible culprit.
I also like the development of Elizabeth's and Darcy's relationship very much. The feelings on Darcy's part have not changed, they only deepened, but Elizabeth's feelings slowly begin to change because she is able to observe Darcy among family and close friends and in his familiar surroundings. And when tragic strikes she is also able to see the master of Pemberley handling the affair with great care, sensibility, justice and kindness. She comes to understand him better and admire him for the man he truly is.
Because of the house party and then the flooding there are not many people involved in this book and so there are naturally not many intruders to Darcy's and Elizabeth's love story. The only obstacles to their relationship are the mystery and ODC itself because, before they can indulge in their love, they first need to learn about the (ongoing) feelings of the other person, and solve the mystery together (in parts).
I like Elizabeth very much in this story. She is rather bold but with this she encourages Darcy to propose a second time to her. It is also her who encourages intimate moments between ODC for the first time. I like that she is daring. This also enables her to really care for Darcy when he the weight of responsibility for managing the flood and investigating in the mystery lay heavy on his shoulders. She sees that he also needs someone to lean on and share the burden and she is willing to take that role, even if she is not already his wife. This deepens their relationship greatly and lets them experience something like a life as husband and wife before being wed.
If you like a story where Darcy and Elizabeth need to solve a mystery together and with this discover that they (still) love and care for each other, you should read this great story.
I highly recommend this book.
Note: The book contains scenes for mature audiences and some violence.
- Dorotea Maria Fulde BenkeReviewed in Spain on November 15, 2022
5.0 out of 5 stars Surprising suspense
There is a real suspense scenario waiting for you between the pages of a good lovestory. A lovely Darcy and a fascinating Elizabeth or the other way round if you prefer... Enjoy!
- ElsterReviewed in France on October 22, 2023
4.0 out of 5 stars Good but could have been better
This variation is good (Heather Moll knows how to write) but not without flaws. It is a bit repetitive. How many times are we told that both Darcy's bachelor friends are resentful towards their fathers for giving them a small allowance or towards their own situation (one expecting to herit, the other only being a second son)? Far too many times. SPOILER**** Like many reviewers I felt uneasy with Elizabeth the temptress seducing a chaste Darcy. I fail to appreciate a chaste 28 years old Regency Darcy. It is not believable: all upper class men were sexually educated at a very (shockingly) tender age by courtisans. A bold, brazen, wanton Regency Elizabeth is not a total impossibility because women, in essentials, were the same as today and certainly experienced desire, but this particular evolution in ODG's character is not really pleasant, is it? Interesting story but could have been better with a better editing (to remedy the repetitions) and without the pre-marital trysts which did not bring a lot to the plot. At least they were well written. 3.5 stars.