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Total Mess (Broken Ridge Book 2) Kindle Edition

4.0 4.0 out of 5 stars 11 ratings

*A standalone brother's best friend romance, part of the Broken Ridge series*

She’s the only girl he wants.
And he’s the only guy she won’t let herself have.

Life would be so much easier for Zara Miller if her brother’s best friend, James Leroux, actually understood the unwritten rules of the universe.
But he doesn’t.
Falling in love with your brother’s best friend is never a good idea,
But only one of them seems to care.
He doesn’t care that his sly touches and stolen kisses are driving her insane,
He’s determined to make her his girl.

Welcome back to Broken Ridge University, where crazy girls meet impatient guys, and hilarious antics ensue in the battle to win their happy ever after.

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  • ASIN ‏ : ‎ B08JH91ZDJ
  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ (November 2, 2020)
  • Publication date ‏ : ‎ November 2, 2020
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • File size ‏ : ‎ 1.5 MB
  • Simultaneous device usage ‏ : ‎ Unlimited
  • Text-to-Speech ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Screen Reader ‏ : ‎ Supported
  • Enhanced typesetting ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • X-Ray ‏ : ‎ Not Enabled
  • Word Wise ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Print length ‏ : ‎ 198 pages
  • Customer Reviews:
    4.0 4.0 out of 5 stars 11 ratings

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  • Reviewed in the United States on November 5, 2020
    Urk! This pair seem determined to sabotage their own happiness. Once again, I was easily able to connect with our hero. James is pretty sweet, and he’s clearly devoted to Zara. Our heroine left me a little twitchy for a lot of this book. I had to keep reminding myself of how many years there are between my last birthday and her age, because Zara can be remarkably childish about some stuff. Mind you, James doesn’t entirely escape this behavior either. Like the first one, this book also seems to focus on good communication and what happens when that isn’t present in a relationship. A lot of problems could have been solved in their lives if they’d talked to each and the people around them. When all’s said and done, I quite enjoyed reading this book and getting to know these characters. I’m looking forward to seeing what’s coming for the rest of the Broken Ridge students.
    I received a complimentary copy of this book through Booksprout.
  • Reviewed in the United States on July 4, 2021
    I enjoyed Zara and James their characters were a little childish at times but not enough to keep me from reading the book. The chemistry is mutual between them but they keep throwing up obstacles.

    I received a free copy of this bookm and am voluntarily leaving a review.
  • Reviewed in the United States on November 2, 2020
    Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️

    This story has a great plot and has a bit of emotion. It was lacking the spark that makes the story whole. I wasn’t able to connect with the characters and I felt as if I were being told what was happening instead of it happening.

    I wrote this voluntary review in exchange for an ARC copy.
  • Reviewed in the United States on November 19, 2020
    I enjoyed reading this story. The characters were likable with amazing chemistry. I liked how he seemed enthralled by her. I wasn’t totally on board with some of his actions but it was entertaining to read. I look forward to reading more books in this series.

    I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
  • Reviewed in the United States on November 8, 2020
    I enjoyed James and Zara's story, their journey was a bit bumpy since their relationship was on the forbidden side but they were made for each other, their connection and chemistry was strong, they were good together.
  • Reviewed in the United States on November 8, 2020
    I liked Zara and James. I liked the fact that the attraction was mutual, the draw was there from both and it helped to drive the story in an enjoyable way. I like brother's best friend romances and it is nice when the stories deliver as this one did. Good job.

    I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
  • Reviewed in the United States on November 13, 2020
    Zara has a crush on her neighbor, James, and finds out he is her brother's best friend. James feels a connection with her but she is off limits. Will they give in to their chemistry?

    I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
  • Reviewed in the United States on November 7, 2020
    The book is a good romance read. The story has a good story line. The characters are good, and they have good chemistry.

    I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

Top reviews from other countries

  • n young
    4.0 out of 5 stars Another great story for this series!
    Reviewed in the United Kingdom on November 29, 2021
    Another fab edition to this series this time giving us the story of James & Zara.
    After meeting them both in book 1 we know that something is going on with them but we just don't know their background.
    This book takes us back to when they first meet and every step of their journey.. Good and bad to see where they end up.
    Full of funny moments.. stubbornness.. and fab characters this was a great easy to read story.
    Would really love Xander to get a story for sure!
  • Sarah Williams
    3.0 out of 5 stars Sweet.
    Reviewed in Australia on November 16, 2020
    Not bad, but not amazing. A little slow for impatient me. The characters were nice though. I just got a little impatient for things to move along.
  • Nicky jane
    5.0 out of 5 stars Couldn't put it down! Highly recommend
    Reviewed in the United Kingdom on November 3, 2020
    I absolutely loved Total mess...couldn't put it down Zara and James's story is touching, steamy and unputtable down (not sure that's a word but...🤪)

    Highly recommend and I can't wait for mooooore🙏 dont leave me hanging too long ladies 😅

    These collaborations are one of the best I've read in a while!! Truly talented 😍

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