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A Very Bossy Christmas (Very Holiday Book 1) Kindle Edition
And yet, here we are.
This isn’t even the most unprofessional thing that’s happened between us in the past couple of weeks.
The first was when I agreed to let her have Christmas Day off, but only if she goes with me to three family gatherings as my fake girlfriend.
The second was when she caught me belting out a Christmas song on stage in the awful hotel bar.
The third was the hot, drunk, angry sex that followed, but I do not regret it.
And she hasn’t even found out the real reason I need her by my side this holiday season.
I need to pull it together before I do the dumbest, most unprofessional thing of all—fall head over heels in love with the only assistant who’s lasted more than a month at the job and claims to hate me and my moods more than she hates eggnog.
And I’ve seen how much she hates eggnog.
***This is a steamy grumpy boss fake dating Christmas romantic comedy novel***
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateOctober 26, 2020
- File size3.2 MB
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Talk about spreading not only the Christmas cheer but the swoony, sexy, smile-inducing, hilariously funny and all-round fabulous cheer as well. We cannot wipe the smiles off our faces. This book was THE PERFECT remedy for the sh*t show that is 2020! We couldn't have found a better escape! An absolute reading delight and a top 2020 fave! - TotallyBooked Blog
Kayley Loring's wit and charm with this book is top notch. I always have a big smile on my face while reading her work and this is no different. Declan is one sexy, bossy man but Maddie is strong enough to give him some bossy sass right back. Not only are the main characters extremely lovable but the families are perfectly written and so fun to read about. - Kimberly, A Romance A Day
This book is RomCom Gold! Filled with laugh out loud text exchanges, witty as all get out verbal sparring, crazy pants family shenanigans, hot as cocoa horizontal (and sometimes vertical) gymnastics, impromptu drunken singing and naked dance offs. It's the type of book that you will start and finish in one sitting, while simultaneously snort laughing, humming Christmas tunes and fanning yourself. - judy.ann.loves.books
If there is only one Holiday romance you read this year, it should be A Very Bossy Christmas. This book has the humor, the heat, two crazy families and Declan Cannavale.... A Very Bossy Christmas is the perfect Holiday romcom that will have you laughing and swoony from the very first page. A MUST READ! - Amy, Book Addict Reviews
Don't wait until Christmas to read this one!! A Very Bossy Christmas by Kayley Loring, is one holiday story you definitely want to come early!!! I've been a fan of Ms. Loring since the first book I read by her, and this one is by far the best yet. It's a light-hearted, sizzling with chemistry, and full of steam office romance. - Cee Cee Houston
This book had me laughing and swooning at the same time, Miss Loring has become one of my favorite authors, to be honest I'm not a fan of Christmas stories, but after reading this one? Give me all the Christmas stories! - Mary H.
I absolutely adored this book! It was funny, moving, witty, hot and so perfectly realistic. The characters were all completely hilarious and made me want to be at all their events. They all acted exactly as I thought family and extended family should. The banter and shenanigans just kept me up all night reading. Fantastic writing. - A Book Lover's Emporium Book Blog
Product details
- ASIN : B08LKRR1Q8
- Publisher : (October 26, 2020)
- Publication date : October 26, 2020
- Language : English
- File size : 3.2 MB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 312 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: #37,751 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #117 in Holiday Fiction (Kindle Store)
- #126 in Holiday Fiction (Books)
- #192 in Christmas Holiday Romance eBooks
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About the author

Amazon Top 25 and USA Today bestselling author Kayley Loring spent many years as a screenwriter (under a different name) in Los Angeles before moving to the Pacific Northwest to live out her childhood dream of being a Disney heroine who talks and sings to woodland creatures. When not trying to keep animals alive, she’s writing steamy romantic comedy novels, obviously. She’s breathing cleaner air, writing dirtier words, and staring at her computer screen until her eyeballs dry out instead of prancing around Southern California in miniskirts and going to the hair salon. Still waiting for the woodland creatures to clean her house, though.
Read or listen to Kayley’s books when you want to laugh, warm your heart, and enjoy top-notch banter, strong heroines who need to be chased, lovable characters you’d want to know in real life, and swoon over perfectly imperfect book boyfriends.
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Customers find the book humorous with its witty banter and Christmas references. They describe it as an entertaining read from start to finish, with a sweet, romantic storyline. The characters are described as wonderful, charming, and likable. Readers appreciate the emotional depth and passion of the story.
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Customers enjoy the book's humor. They find the banter witty and hilarious, with Christmas references in the sex scenes. The texting and dancing are also humorous. Readers appreciate the writing style and sarcasm.
"...The snark, the sass, the sexy times. The banter, the tension, the subtle hints and comments. I loved it! All of it!! Did I snort-giggle a few times?..." Read more
"This is a great story and a fun read. I loved all the characters with such sassy and saucy characters with funny banter ,snarky wit,and hot scenes ...." Read more
"...characters, witty and fast dialogue, well developed plot along with amusing and engaging side characters, however I feel A Very Bossy Christmas is..." Read more
"...I loved all of the BANTER and the chemistry that just leaps off the page...." Read more
Customers enjoy the book's readability. They find it entertaining from start to finish, with a great story and an HEA. The author does an excellent job of incorporating her teenage mind into the story, keeping their attention. Overall, readers describe it as a perfect holiday romantic comedy that will have them laughing.
"This is a great story and a fun read. I loved all the characters with such sassy and saucy characters with funny banter ,snarky wit,and hot scenes ...." Read more
"...’s works have lovable characters, witty and fast dialogue, well developed plot along with amusing and engaging side characters, however I feel A..." Read more
"...holiday magic with this one, because this couple was truly entertaining from start to finish...." Read more
"Absolutely loved the banter between the two main characters, it was downright awesome!..." Read more
Customers enjoy the light and steamy romance in the book. They find it a fun Christmas-themed contemporary romance with loving characters and chemistry. The love story is amazing, with sweet moments and laugh-out-loud sex scenes. Readers describe the book as a good romantic comedy with a cast of characters.
"...These two were perfect together. And cute. It was heartwarming to see all of Declan’s grumpy outer layers start peeling away during the..." Read more
"...In between all of this, there are sweet moments such as Declan looking out for Maddie’s widowed landlord, an office Christmas party from the great..." Read more
"...If you’re looking for a light and steamy romance that will make you smile, fill you with holiday cheer, and make you love it more with every scene,..." Read more
"...It was so funny and sexy and sweet and ahh perfect! READ IT! Sooooo good" Read more
Customers enjoy the well-developed characters and their quick wit. They appreciate the characters' recognition of their attraction from the start. The book features a wide range of side characters that add depth to the story.
"...I adored the characters, I felt connected to them and fell hard for them...." Read more
"This is a great story and a fun read. I loved all the characters with such sassy and saucy characters with funny banter ,snarky wit,and hot scenes ...." Read more
"...All of Ms. Lorring’s works have lovable characters, witty and fast dialogue, well developed plot along with amusing and engaging side characters,..." Read more
"Absolutely loved the banter between the two main characters, it was downright awesome!..." Read more
Customers enjoy the book's cuteness. They find the story fun, flirty, and heartwarming at the same time. The characters are described as adorable, sassy, and saucy. Readers also mention that the book is festively charming, with sexy times just right. The main characters are described as sweet and the ending feels like a Hallmark Movie. The book is artfully crafted with details from Declan's eccentric Irish-Italian family.
"...The snark, the sass, the sexy times. The banter, the tension, the subtle hints and comments. I loved it! All of it!! Did I snort-giggle a few times?..." Read more
"...I loved all the characters with such sassy and saucy characters with funny banter ,snarky wit,and hot scenes . HEA❣️😉..." Read more
"...It’s the perfect combination of sweet, sexy, and snort-laugh-inducing, crackling with sexual tension one minute and then making you swoon with a..." Read more
"...They had such good chemistry it was so funny and cute at the same time! Also the book had a good fair amount of spice! Great read, thank you!" Read more
Customers enjoy the book's emotional depth. They find the characters passionate, sweet, and caring. The sex scenes are intense and emotional, with humor and heart. The characters are compassionate, thoughtful, and caring.
"...The snark, the sass, the sexy times. The banter, the tension, the subtle hints and comments. I loved it! All of it!! Did I snort-giggle a few times?..." Read more
"...combination of sweet, sexy, and snort-laugh-inducing, crackling with sexual tension one minute and then making you swoon with a tender moment the..." Read more
"...It was a gut busting, laugh until you cry type of book. Both main characters are incredible in their own way...." Read more
"...might’ve been an alpha but I thought he was pretty decent and respectful man especially when it came to Maddie...." Read more
Customers enjoy the warm family moments and extended families in the book. They find the holiday romance enjoyable with humor and a touch of holiday spirit. The family dynamics are described as hilarious.
"I really enjoyed this holiday read, I loved all the banter and witticism...." Read more
"...A fun, silly, sexy, brilliant read for Christmas." Read more
"...It was a good book to read for the holiday season." Read more
"...Loved this spicy little quick read and all of the holiday innuendos! So so cute!" Read more
Customers enjoy the writing quality of the book. They appreciate the narration, phonetically spelling words to convey accents, and the way the female characters are written. The banter in the story is witty and hilarious. The book is an easy read with lots of dialogue and happenings. Readers find the author credible and fleshed out her characters.
"...And I can now say, it’s all true!! I really loved the writing, I felt like I was watching a movie...." Read more
"Funny, fast paced, easy to read! I couldn't wait to see what happened or what was or done said next!" Read more
"A listened to it and Connor Crais is an excellent narrator. I loved the banter in this story. I loved the strong and smart female main character...." Read more
"Highly recommend! I loved the characters and again, I loved the writing. It was a good book to read for the holiday season." Read more
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5 stars, very very funny, DO NOT READ while drinking, driving or watching a sad movie
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- Reviewed in the United States on February 13, 2022OMGoodness! I’d been wanting to read this one for quite a while. With Valentine’s Day coming, I also wanted to read book 2 (A Very Friendly Valentine’s Day), so it kinda pushed me to read this one first. I didn’t have to, but I wanted to.
And I’m so glad I did!!!! I loved it SO MUCH!!
I had heard so many good things about this book, about this author. And I can now say, it’s all true!!
I really loved the writing, I felt like I was watching a movie. I adored the characters, I felt connected to them and fell hard for them. Declan and Maddie were the perfect mix of witty, charming, sexy, and fun.
This entire story was highly enjoyable for me. I’m pretty sure I smiled big throughout most of it. It was exactly what I hoped it would be, and exactly what I wanted and needed.
The snark, the sass, the sexy times. The banter, the tension, the subtle hints and comments. I loved it! All of it!! Did I snort-giggle a few times? More than likely.
It’s so obvious Declan and Maddie wanted each other. I just wanted to grab them and shove them together and make them kiss it out. They gave each other a hard time, but deep down, there is a lot of sizzle and spark, and so much love and attraction and admiration.
Declan comes off as gruff and rude and grumpy, but really, he’s a big ol’ softie! And she is his assistant who doesn’t put up with his cr@p. She’s smart, she’s competent, and she knows how to handle everything that comes her way. Even Declan’s demands. These two were perfect together. And cute.
It was heartwarming to see all of Declan’s grumpy outer layers start peeling away during the story. To see inside his brain, see what was really in his heart. In the end, he was just a man, who was so in love with a woman, and wanting her to love him back. Oh the feels…they were strong with this story.
And his family! Loved them’ It’s one of those families who steal a little piece of your heart. And you want to be a part of that family. And you miss them when the story’s over.
This was my first read from this author and I’m happy to say I am now a fan. BIG FAN.
- Reviewed in the United States on October 29, 2024This is a great story and a fun read. I loved all the characters with such sassy and saucy characters with funny banter ,snarky wit,and hot scenes . HEA❣️😉
- Reviewed in the United States on November 22, 2020Over the course of this year I have come to discover that reading a Kayley Lorring novel will result in abdominal pain.
That’s from the laughter.
I’ve also discovered that I have a bad habit of reading Ms. Lorring’s novels while the rest of my family watches epic adventure movies or tear rendering drama. Thus leaving me laughing uproariously at exactly the wrong moment. I understand that this is a “me” problem, however I find that it adds to my reading pleasure.
If you are a new reader to Ms. Lorring, I would highly recommend this novel as your first read. All of Ms. Lorring’s works have lovable characters, witty and fast dialogue, well developed plot along with amusing and engaging side characters, however I feel A Very Bossy Christmas is the best she’s written to date.
Declan Cannavale and Maddie Cooper are our couple de jour in A Very Bossy Christmas. Declan is a slick New York real estate lawyer trembling in fear of his mother’s wrath and falling from “favorite brother” status on his sister’s list.
Maddie Cooper is a Satan Island and downtown NYC girl who is taking names and keeping Declan in control.
As Ms. Lorring describes Maddie through Declan’s eyes:
The woman who keeps my schedule running smoothly and handles me with the sleek, unruffled grace of a highly skilled assassin.
Declan is trying to avoid going home for the holidays - Thanksgiving and Christmas.
At any and all cost.
There is a back story regarding his brother getting married, however Ms. Lorring dishes that amazing dish out slowly.
When Declan realizes that he can’t wriggle out from under his mother’s highly skilled Irish mammy guilt, he then comes up with a fool proof plan.
One that includes Maddie. Some legal papers. And a LOT of booze.
Declan drafts an agreement asking Maddie for the following:
You are asking me to acknowledge this discreet, temporary, simulated consensual romantic relationship during nonworking hours will not interfere with Sentinel’s company policy of teamwork
That’s right - Declan presents Maddie with a legal agreement to become his fake girlfriend.
The lure he holds over her head - allowing her the time off over Christmas that she had requested.
Maddie, signs on the dotted line. Crazy - right?
What then ensures is a non stop slide into outrageous family situations featuring Maddie’s sister, a teen niece who starts writing a fan fiction story about Declan and Maddie (#TeamMaclan) when not stealing Maddie’s phone to text Declan, a Staten Island aunt and that’s just Maddie’s family!!
Declan’s family takes us on a booze filled joy ride of the Boston cousins and the Irish cousins culminating in all of the cousins losing many many days, Declan sending nearly incoherent texts to Maddie, and a wedding.
Right. THAT wedding. The wedding of Declan’s brother to..... a woman that I refuse to name. (Yeah. I’d blow a raspberry at me too)
In between all of this, there are sweet moments such as Declan looking out for Maddie’s widowed landlord, an office Christmas party from the great beyond, sexy times that always start with “we are NOT having sexy times” dialogue, and Declan falling in love with Maddie. Or the other way around. By the end of the story they wind up married.
One of the biggest things that made me laugh were all the spot on accents. From the different New York ones, to Boston’s Southie, to the Irish. The tempo, tone, slang and dialogue were absolutely on point! I’ve grown up sandwiched between “the city” and Boston. I could clearly hear those accents as I read.
Now that I’ve gone on too long, I am recommending this book as THE Christmas book for 2020. It is the book your heart and soul need.
Just, don’t read it while watching “It’s a Wonderful Life”
You may find yourself in a room of family bent over cry laughing while George is out being all maudlin and soul crushing.
5.0 out of 5 starsOver the course of this year I have come to discover that reading a Kayley Lorring novel will result in abdominal pain.5 stars, very very funny, DO NOT READ while drinking, driving or watching a sad movie
Reviewed in the United States on November 22, 2020
That’s from the laughter.
I’ve also discovered that I have a bad habit of reading Ms. Lorring’s novels while the rest of my family watches epic adventure movies or tear rendering drama. Thus leaving me laughing uproariously at exactly the wrong moment. I understand that this is a “me” problem, however I find that it adds to my reading pleasure.
If you are a new reader to Ms. Lorring, I would highly recommend this novel as your first read. All of Ms. Lorring’s works have lovable characters, witty and fast dialogue, well developed plot along with amusing and engaging side characters, however I feel A Very Bossy Christmas is the best she’s written to date.
Declan Cannavale and Maddie Cooper are our couple de jour in A Very Bossy Christmas. Declan is a slick New York real estate lawyer trembling in fear of his mother’s wrath and falling from “favorite brother” status on his sister’s list.
Maddie Cooper is a Satan Island and downtown NYC girl who is taking names and keeping Declan in control.
As Ms. Lorring describes Maddie through Declan’s eyes:
The woman who keeps my schedule running smoothly and handles me with the sleek, unruffled grace of a highly skilled assassin.
Declan is trying to avoid going home for the holidays - Thanksgiving and Christmas.
At any and all cost.
There is a back story regarding his brother getting married, however Ms. Lorring dishes that amazing dish out slowly.
When Declan realizes that he can’t wriggle out from under his mother’s highly skilled Irish mammy guilt, he then comes up with a fool proof plan.
One that includes Maddie. Some legal papers. And a LOT of booze.
Declan drafts an agreement asking Maddie for the following:
You are asking me to acknowledge this discreet, temporary, simulated consensual romantic relationship during nonworking hours will not interfere with Sentinel’s company policy of teamwork
That’s right - Declan presents Maddie with a legal agreement to become his fake girlfriend.
The lure he holds over her head - allowing her the time off over Christmas that she had requested.
Maddie, signs on the dotted line. Crazy - right?
What then ensures is a non stop slide into outrageous family situations featuring Maddie’s sister, a teen niece who starts writing a fan fiction story about Declan and Maddie (#TeamMaclan) when not stealing Maddie’s phone to text Declan, a Staten Island aunt and that’s just Maddie’s family!!
Declan’s family takes us on a booze filled joy ride of the Boston cousins and the Irish cousins culminating in all of the cousins losing many many days, Declan sending nearly incoherent texts to Maddie, and a wedding.
Right. THAT wedding. The wedding of Declan’s brother to..... a woman that I refuse to name. (Yeah. I’d blow a raspberry at me too)
In between all of this, there are sweet moments such as Declan looking out for Maddie’s widowed landlord, an office Christmas party from the great beyond, sexy times that always start with “we are NOT having sexy times” dialogue, and Declan falling in love with Maddie. Or the other way around. By the end of the story they wind up married.
One of the biggest things that made me laugh were all the spot on accents. From the different New York ones, to Boston’s Southie, to the Irish. The tempo, tone, slang and dialogue were absolutely on point! I’ve grown up sandwiched between “the city” and Boston. I could clearly hear those accents as I read.
Now that I’ve gone on too long, I am recommending this book as THE Christmas book for 2020. It is the book your heart and soul need.
Just, don’t read it while watching “It’s a Wonderful Life”
You may find yourself in a room of family bent over cry laughing while George is out being all maudlin and soul crushing.
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- Sarah M.Reviewed in Canada on November 28, 2020
5.0 out of 5 stars A Sexy, Laugh-Out-Loud Christmas Romance
I’ve never read anything from Kayley Loring, but A Very Bossy Christmas was added to the top of my holiday reading list after seeing such great reviews! And oh my—It absolutely delivered.
Declan, a successful real estate lawyer, is a workaholic that can only be tolerated by one assistant: Maddie Cooper. Intelligent, beautiful, and unfazed by the moody, demanding attitude of her boss, Maddie is a fiery heroine that didn’t hold back her mind. The banter between these two was hilarious and oozed sexual tension.
Needing a date for the holiday season to keep his mother content, the two agree upon a fake dating arrangement, complete with a signed agreement that it won’t disturb their working relationship. As their attraction boils over, barriers are crossed and it was such an explosion of built up emotions (and VERY hot!).
Declan, being Irish-Italian, brought a lot of humour in the form of his family. From food comas, velour track pants, and an epic bachelor party filled with drunk apologies, there were so many laugh-out-loud moments. Add in Maddie’s equally comical Staten Island crew, this had such a strong, authentic feel of family and completely gave me those cozy, Christmas vibes.
If you’re looking for a hilarious, steamy delight this holiday season, you need to pick this one up!
- KatjaReviewed in Germany on December 15, 2021
5.0 out of 5 stars Loved it!!!
It was such a sweet and hilarious book. It really put me in a great mood. The writing is awesome, I didn't want it to end.
- SRReviewed in India on November 25, 2020
5.0 out of 5 stars Hilarious and wonderful!
This book was recommended by a friend and I am so glad I read it! Started laughing from pretty much the beginning. Loved the main characters and every weirdo thrown into the mix (family, office etc) but my favourite character might be the witty, perceptive & meddling 13 year old Piper (sensational! :D)
I was surprised when I shed a few tears for the hero at his backstory but its very nicely handled, & especially the way he makes his peace with it. This is a crazy fun Christmas read & I highly recommend it for the non stop laughter (And of course the romance! :))
- LovesbooksReviewed in the United Kingdom on November 22, 2020
5.0 out of 5 stars Loved it!
Fantastic easy steamy read! Set around the festive period but not overly xmas-y. Liked: both of our mc's are super likeable, Maddie is sassy and keeps him in line, Declan is plenty alpha but inside is an absolute Marshmallow 🥰. The banter between them was fab and I loved the text convos. The sex scenes where well written and spaced out with the narrative nicely. Secondary characters mostly all likeable and a satisfying HEA with an epilogue that peeks into their future which I love.
Dislike: the whole story of the ex girlfriend with his brother. Hated it. I'm sorry but if the brother was as close to Declan as described there's no way he would be lusting after his girlfriend for 9 years!! And vice versa, she wouldn't have stayed with dec for that long if she wanted a different freaking brother. No way would the family be OK with it either. And marrying the other brother 6 months later, seriously? The joke about her screaming Declans name when having sex with the bro......bleurgh!!! No man on the planet would be OK with even thinking that! I avoid all sibling ex stories because the ick factor is so gross that I just can't! So I really hated that whole part of this story. BUT that being said I thoroughly enjoyed this book and if you can overlook that bit then have at it. First book by this author but won't be the last and will be reading the next book!
- ClaireReviewed in Australia on August 30, 2023
5.0 out of 5 stars Awesome read!!
I love, love, loved this book!!! I loved the FMC. Such a refreshing character compared to some of the FMC’S I’ve read lately. Enjoyed the fake dating trope - it’s not always my fave but when done right, it’s so enjoyable and this was done right! I also don’t love the third act break up but this was done well and not too angsty or drawn out, just right. I adored Dec and his family, as well as Maddie’s family. I loved how well the author wrote out the accents and I couldn’t stop giggling. This book had me smiling and laughing and swooning. Is it weird I want to read Hannah and Brady’s story? And of course Eddie and Byrdie!