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Edge of the Breach (Rift Cycle Book 1) Kindle Edition
We all become monsters at the edge of the breach. In a post-apocalyptic world where season of birth determines power, interrealm war beckons two lost and fated souls.
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There is a hole in the sky. They call it the Rift. A portal to the gods. The scar of a suffering world. Through it, the gods rule the last scraps of civilization, harkening war. As chaos beckons, two leaders emerge from the ashes of a dying planet.
Julian Kyder is the son of an abusive rape victim who compensates for his abandonment through psychopathy. Sira Rune is a cancer survivor who dedicates her life to living free and fearless while experiencing the taboo and the unorthodox. Rune is the only one unafraid of Kyder, and that terrifies him, because he only knows how to function through fear. Even though she gives him more chances than he deserves, how much violence can she forgive? When is a person beyond redemption? While he struggles to control his demons and she struggles to find purpose, the gods drag the ruined world into war.
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CONTENT WARNING: The Rift Cycle is a highly graphic series intended for mature audiences. There is on-page murder, death, torture, mutilation, rape, child abuse, substance abuse, self-harm, and suicide ideation, as well as triggers for mental illnesses (depression, anxiety, OCD, and PTSD). This list is not comprehensive.
Please read at your own risk.
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1: Pain Made a Man
Kyder, Age 9 - July 7, 7009
Her body is stone. Her eyes glass. She doesn’t see me. Doesn’t want me. Yet her blood runs through me, a river of pain.
I call her mother, but she calls me nothing. She hopes to forget me. Hopes I will disappear. Conceived in violence, I am a constant reminder of the crime that made me.
“Come,” she orders me. Like a dog. And I jog at her heels, obedient.
She won’t use my name. It’s a reminder I exist. The meaning behind it is empty, anyway. She refused to name me, so the hospital staff did. Julian Kyder—Julian after the doctor who delivered me and Kyder after the hospital. Forever marked by the circumstances of my birth.
She tried to abort, but I survived. She put me up for adoption, but no one took me. She tried to release me into the system, but they were already at overcapacity. We’re trapped. Stuck together as two halves of misery. The doctor told me I am a miracle. She told me I am a curse.
“This way.”
She leads me along the edge of the Shelf toward the market. With each step, my feet crunch along the parched gravel. To our left, cliffs drop hundreds of meters into the Ruined Sea, a toxic cesspool that encircles the island. In the distance, Mount Erebus puffs ash into the blanched sky, a grandfather smoking the last bit of a cigar.
We mutilated our world, bombarded the planet for centuries with nuclear weapons until we ran out of missiles, until Earth flipped upside-down. The only habitable continent is Antarctica, now the North Pole, and even here, the war melted the desolate wasteland into a scorching desert. Humans near extinction, huddled near the top of the planet like exiles. But we deserve it.
Sweat trickles down my back. I pull my robe tight around myself, hoping to block out the sun. It’s summer, so there’s no respite from the heat. The days are endless. They bleed into each other like ink on a page, no distinction between the lines. Night won’t come for another few months, and soon after it does, it won’t leave till winter’s done.
Some call it balance. Day and night. Light and dark. Sun and stars. Birth and death. People look for meaning when it’s only chaos disguised as order…
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- Publication dateJanuary 8, 2020
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- ASIN : B082MR74M1
- Publisher : Independently published (January 8, 2020)
- Publication date : January 8, 2020
- Language : English
- File size : 3.3 MB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
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- Print length : 514 pages
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Halo Scot is an award-winning author of dark fiction and a founding member of Queer Indie. Scot has been featured in Publishers Weekly and BookLife, appearing at Brooklyn Book Festival, TBRCon, and Pop Pride Week, an event hosted by ReedPop, BookCon, and New York Comic Con.
Halo pretends to be cool, dark, and mysterious, when in reality, Scot is a clumsy and awkward creature who eats shadows and harbors a severe distrust of ladybugs. Prone to chaos, this nightmare-dwelling beast aims to achieve galactic domination through a void-screaming expertise, dormant telekinesis, and aggressive cackling. To summon this obscure and skittish writer, one must align the following items in a circle as an offering: three shots of whiskey, two bowls of jelly beans, something shiny or lit on fire, and a printed photo of Nicolas Cage as a duck.
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Customers find this book to be a gripping story with richly developed characters and creative world-building. The writing is praised for its realism, with one review highlighting the brilliant portrayal of a psychopath. Customers feel emotionally invested in the narrative and appreciate its intense, immersive nature. The dark content receives mixed reactions, with customers describing it as both fascinating and disturbing.
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Customers enjoy the storytelling in this book, describing it as a gripping tale that flows well, with one customer noting its strong Grimdark adventure style.
"...Emphasis on dark. In every sense. And yet, there's this stubbornly human persistence about the whole thing, both with Rune and Kyder and with the..." Read more
"...In time, I found myself being able to flow with the story. This is not a story that you just rush through...." Read more
"...I felt emotionally invested in the characters and found them very real, flaws and all. The quality of writing was obvious from the first lines...." Read more
"...from two main POVs, takes the reader on a captivating and immersive post-apocalyptic world of a blazing hot Antarctica in the 71st century...." Read more
Customers find the book highly readable, describing it as brilliant and enthralling, with one customer noting how it draws readers in.
"...A bloody, graphic, titillating, disturbing treat." Read more
"...violence, along with a mild dash of necrophilia, then it is worth the read. Also, there is French in this book...." Read more
"...Scot's imagination: The story told from two main POVs, takes the reader on a captivating and immersive post-apocalyptic world of a blazing hot..." Read more
"...is one of the most striking and original and well-written and memorable books I've ever read...." Read more
Customers appreciate the emotional depth of the book, finding it disturbing and terrifying, with one customer noting the complex emotions of Kyder and Rune.
"...Not actually kidding. Ela is...a strange creature, but lovable in her own way...." Read more
"...Violent imagery and graphic descriptions of their suffering play into the reader’s vulnerability and sympathetic nature in the best way...." Read more
"...I was immediately gripped and entertained. It evoked so many emotions, I laughed, I cried, I cringed and bit my nails...." Read more
"...I especially liked Sira Rune. I felt emotionally invested and wanted to find out what's going to happen next...." Read more
Customers praise the writing quality of the book, describing it as amazing and impressive, with one customer noting it's a beautifully written post-apocalyptic novel.
"...Scot is a brilliant writer, both in terms of the words themselves and the overall narrative...." Read more
"...The quality of writing was obvious from the first lines...." Read more
"...the author's impressive and outstanding story telling and writing ability. A massive congratulations to Scot. Well done." Read more
"...Edge Of The Breach is one of the most striking and original and well-written and memorable books I've ever read...." Read more
Customers appreciate the character development in the book, noting that the characters are richly developed and the story focuses on the two main characters.
"...What I also found myself loving was the fact that her characters break the fourth wall. I found myself favoring Kyder more though...." Read more
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"...But the characters are shaped by these, in a “what doesn’t kill you makes you stronger” kind of way...." Read more
Customers appreciate the visual style of the book, with its creative and fascinating world-building, and one customer describes it as an intricately designed post-apocalyptic setting.
"...A bloody, graphic, titillating, disturbing treat." Read more
"...It is clear that the world in this story is unique and that is something I like. I just had to get used to it that is for sure...." Read more
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"...say, without hesitation, is that Edge Of The Breach is one of the most striking and original and well-written and memorable books I've ever read...." Read more
Customers find the book immersive and intense, with one customer noting its great emotional depth.
"...This book is as thick with emotion as it is with the sex and the violence; the heartwrenching trajectory of Rune's life, the helplessness with which..." Read more
"...But while it’s all that, it’s also captivating. One of the most ingenious things I’ve read...." Read more
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Customers have mixed reactions to the dark content of the book, with some finding it fascinating, while others describe it as very dark.
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- Reviewed in the United States on January 15, 2022Edge of the Breach is a masterpiece.
It's also a terribly uncomfortable read. Not because of the violence or the sex or the frank language (though there is one scene, late in the book, that prooooooobably should come with a warning); no, the discomfort comes from how much of myself I saw in both Rune and Kyder. Kyder, especially.
This book is sci-fi, arguably spec fic, but those aspects are but background elements. The true story is the shared tragedy of the two protagonists. This book is as thick with emotion as it is with the sex and the violence; the heartwrenching trajectory of Rune's life, the helplessness with which Kyder's true nature is revealed. They parallel in so many ways, and in just as many ways, they are diametrically opposed, and the delicate touch with which Halo Scot handles them both is remarkable.
Scot is a brilliant writer, both in terms of the words themselves and the overall narrative. Kyder is the sort of character to be reviled, to be truly despised, and yet. Rune is to be sympathized with, to be the "hero" of the tale, and yet. In the hands of a lesser writer, these characters would be absolutes, caricatures, two-dimensional archetypes.
In Scot's hands, they are dynamic, complicated, the very heart and soul of this book.
Make no mistake: this is grimdark. Emphasis on dark. In every sense. And yet, there's this stubbornly human persistence about the whole thing, both with Rune and Kyder and with the reader's need to turn the page. Edge of the Breach toys ever so slightly with the "will they/won't they" trope, and the beauty of this story is the co-leads.
If the rest of the series keeps the focus right there, I'm in for a treat. A bloody, graphic, titillating, disturbing treat.
- Reviewed in the United States on May 6, 2020I truly don’t know how to start this review off. A loss for words, which is rare when it comes to me writing. To silence any doubts, I will say my thoughts for the most part are positive. This story had moments where it did catch me off guard. The gods that were named in the story, I don’t think are the same gods in mythology. It is clear that the world in this story is unique and that is something I like. I just had to get used to it that is for sure. I also found myself having to write down the dates of each chapter because I got lost at the start. After actually writing down things I was able to keep up. In time, I found myself being able to flow with the story. This is not a story that you just rush through. Simple over looks have you flipping back pages to double check things. I love an author that makes you pay attention to the words on the page. What I also found myself loving was the fact that her characters break the fourth wall. I found myself favoring Kyder more though. There was something about him that I found a bit more interesting. When he broke the wall, there was some comedy to it, dark, but still funny.
While we are on the subject of dark, let us not forget that. Halo mentions not shying away from taboo matters. This book is full of them. There is sex and there is violence. The violence does not bother me. While it was gory, that did nothing to stop me from reading. I did pause a few times though for the underage scenes. It left me feeling uncomfortable. For a moment I thought about not finishing the book. As a reader, sometimes you have to step outside of your comfort zone. I am not saying this is something that you have to do. It is understandable if you cannot. If you manage to get through that and the extreme violence, along with a mild dash of necrophilia, then it is worth the read. Also, there is French in this book. At some places you may need your computer to translate. I found the French to be a lovely touch, but I did need to translate a few terms here and there.
I should note that after stepping out of my comfort zone and just reading, I didn’t stop. I stayed up all night because I wanted to know what happened. There is a lovely set up for the next book. At the end of the book, I found myself with a few questions. One of those questions was will Sira learn to live for herself? I have yet to decide if I really like her or not. For the time being she left more good than bad feelings. I still feel neutral in her regards.
I look forward to seeing what else Halo creates, even if it does cause me to step out of my comfort zone.
- Reviewed in the United States on March 6, 2021Simply amazing.
“We all become monsters at the edge of the breach.”
Couldn’t say that any better, even if I spent a hundred years on it.
So, where do I start? This book is dark. Extremely so. It’s wild, graphical, distressing. Really take this warning to heart; it’s not for the faint of heart. But while it’s all that, it’s also captivating. One of the most ingenious things I’ve read.
I felt emotionally invested in the characters and found them very real, flaws and all. The quality of writing was obvious from the first lines. This is a grimdark SFF tale taking place in a future of some 5000 years away, in where Earth is barely more than a desert wasteland. The story and characters are exceptional, but the tale is indeed full of violence and vile acts, gore, and torture. But… despite this, there’s still something in this book, in its very heart, that keeps you reading.
It’s… powerful. Terrible… but brilliant.
This book is a fascinating study of its two opposing protagonists, Kyder and Rune, from such different circumstances, finding themselves the mirror to each other. I both pity them and am scared by them.
And lastly, can I just say – those chapter titles are pure brilliance.
Till next time, indeed.
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- EefReviewed in Germany on March 1, 2020
5.0 out of 5 stars Wow.
I'm speechless, this was so good! It was very dark at times but I like it when the author pushes boundaries and isn't afraid to show more than tell. I immediately got sucked into the story and I hope there will be a sequel because I want more of this!
- SunReviewed in India on July 16, 2020
4.0 out of 5 stars Intriguing grimdark adventure
It is without a doubt one of the best books I have ever read. The world building was fascinating, character building solid and the plot has been set up nicely for book 2. There are so many points I want to touch on but I can't because that would be spoilers.
Shields, mages, healers and shapeshifters. The moment I read that in the book description, I was hooked. I jumped in expecting the worst evil imaginable because the author does continuously warn about it but I was still shocked by what I saw.
I went through so many emotions as I saw the antagonist growing up from child to adult. Here is where I give special credit to the author. Most often writers give solid character building to the heroes of the story but they only lightly touch upon the history of the villain, about why they became who they are. But Halo did the good job showing the story from both sides, so even if you were horrified by what you saw, a part of you felt something near pity for this wrecked soul.
The story goes at a steady pace from childhood to teenager but suddenly shifted gears to adulthood. I would have loved to see how both our main characters became so powerful in their world. Like an act or a particular mission which causes people to take notice of these two. But that's not a major issue. Perhaps it could be a side story for the author to write about later.
It did get a bit confusing for me when Gods entered the picture. I should probably re-read that particular part of history mentioned in the book.
The writing style was fluid and easy to read as well. Hence I give it a 4 star.
- Kiwi_26Reviewed in the United Kingdom on June 4, 2021
5.0 out of 5 stars A Brutal, visceral Grimdark Horror that will stay with me
I am not a massive Grimdark fan. I have read a few before and most have failed to engage me. Not so Halo Scot’s offering. It grabbed me by my shirt front (okay T-shirt) and did not let go until the last page.
The story is set thousands of years in earth’s future and it is not a happy one. The planet is scorched and has flipped so that Antarctica is the new north and humankind lives there in a desert wasteland. A rift has opened, a gateway to the seven realms, it seems we are not alone and the gods are revealed. Powers are awakened in humans that mirror the four seasons, summer for mages, winter for shields, autumn for shifters and spring for healers.
Into this backdrop come Kyder (our antihero) and Rune (our hero). One born at the height of the summer solstice, the other the winter. The most powerful of their kind they are two sides of the same coin. One broken by birth, the other broken by death. One a psychopath, the other an empath. One born on the fringes of society the other at the heart.
No story is for everyone (I mean some people don’t like Lord of the Rings if you can believe that!) but this story should come with a health warning. I found it as disturbing as I did fascinating and I could not stop reading it.
The story alternates from each protagonists point of view and moves at a great pace from when they are children to young adults. Halo Scot pulls no punches, is brutal to the point I would have turned away if I watched this on a screen, but reading it I had no choice but to read the words, live the emotion, good and bad. It is morally indecent, a lot, which I found more disturbing than the violence. I mean, violence is a known thing, right? We all watch it and read it and see it happening in our world. But what we think, what we know of as right and wrong, those deep, dark questions that hide in the back of our minds are so much scarier when they are on a page (or maybe that is just me).
Into the Breach is much more than all that though. What really carries the story is the conflict of emotion, the war of the soul. It is a story of love rather than hate and of redemption (yes, that old chestnut we all love). I was sucked into Kyder and Rune’s world and bought into their lives in equal measure.
We love Hannibal Lecter for his intelligence and hate him for his cruelty and he scares the s**t out of us, well Kyder is cut of the same cloth. I wouldn’t say he was my guilty pleasure but he was my guilty something.
Anything I didn’t like? Well not really. Maybe a small bugbear, a gripe, that both protagonists break the fourth wall at times and talk directly the reader. Just a thought here or observation there. Well, I didn’t like this. I didn’t notice it in the first half of the book – only the second but that could just have been due to shock! It was a conscious decision by the author, presumably to engage the reader. Make them feel they were part of the story if only a witness to it and I get that some people will love this (I mean, I liked Deadpool’s fourth wall breakage) but for me, it ruined the spell that had been cast, took me out of rather than into the story. Like I say, potatoes, potatos. Thankfully, for me, it was not overused.
This book will live with me for a long time. It is beautifully written, all the characters feel so alive and uniquely distinctive and oh so very human. I could go on, could probably write an essay on this book but well I won’t, too damn lazy and who would read it!
If you are still intrigued after reading my review then stop procrastinating. Go buy it and read it yourself and go write your own damn review. Halo Scot, I salute you, even though you scare me a little and there is three more books to come. Gulp.
- Riv RainsReviewed in Australia on November 2, 2021
5.0 out of 5 stars This is going to get intense. Buddy up and pick a safe word. Shall we?
Kyder is a psychopath. Did I dust that with enough sugar? I can thicken it a little; he's the vigilante of a broken world, bent on destroying weakness and himself. Better? Also, in Halo Scot's Edge Of The Breach—you're him. Ready for that? I probably wasn't.
"Progeny of rape. Heir to violence. Drunk with power. Forged from fire. The sun-made child. Sometimes, I wish to be ordinary. It would be easier if I was normal. Easier, but far less fun." – Kyder, Edge Of The Breach
Welcome to The Breach—a dystopian dark fantasy licking blood from the walls of humanity. Two main characters; two alternating first person points of view. Two very different coming of age stories and a narrative so thick with talent my jaw hurts from chewing it.
"I feel pain. Only pain. It washes away the rest — the depression and the anxiety, the tics and the obsessions, the dark and the light — until I am gray as the land baptized in moonlight." – Kyder, Edge Of The Breach
Kyder, Kyder, Kyder. He gives readers everything. Surging empathy, staggering up-chuck reflex, that sly smile we save in a secret box just for him when he’s charming. It’s all a dance to him. Life’s pains and pleasures—one and the same—literally. This is a great place to discuss trigger warnings, though to be honest, I can’t really think of one that ISN’T included. That might seem troubling, but Scot is the master of making the grimdark palatable—turning gore, gore-geous. Torture, self harm, fear, filthy sex. It’s all there in spades. Hell, don’t bring a spade, you’ll need a damn snow plough!
“The restraints I impose on myself are much more difficult to overcome than the restraints imposed on me by others.” – Rune, Edge Of The Breach
Rune, Rune, Rune! Our quivering heartache. The pure soul, beaten until it shines. This is our other point of view and essentially the essence of humanity so devoid from Kyder. Rune is the reason we can withstand his calculated malice, which Scot knows; switching from one to the other seamlessly, chapter for chapter. She measures just how much staggering brutality we can stomach, then throws open a window to let us breathe with Rune. This clever technique also happens to be the exact reason every reader struggles to set this book down. Each switch is a wrenching, pacing brilliance that left my pillow empty and tea cold. *Shakes fist at Scot*
There’s nothing socially acceptable here, but that’s precisely the point. Scot has written a purge on humanity. Every fear, desire, thirst, disgust—she’s flayed them all raw. Brutal, abrupt descriptions that hang your jaw in awe. As a writer myself, I was constantly stunned by her courage. Page after page of commentary reflecting our own flawed society, blindly determined to go to war with its own tail. She gives me hope; that this industry isn’t going to stamp out its own creative voice. That maybe, just maybe, indie authors of this caliber can save us all from the fetters. So we should all hope.
“Struggle is what makes us grow, but most of us don’t want to grow. We want to shrink back to when there were no questions, concerns, stakes, or responsibilities. We want to shrink back to when we couldn’t f*#k everything up.” – Kyder, Edge Of The Breach (Censored for Amazon by Riv Rains)
If you're not a writer? Edge Of The Breach gives so many a box to stand on. Normalising diversity in sexuality, in race, in torture—wait—let’s not normalise torture just yet! Poo then; she normalises poo. (Is it messed up that I found the poo references almost the hardest to read? Not the torture, the POO! What does that say about me?) She lays out mental illness like a red writhing carpet, takes charge of our perceptions of self harm, neurodiversity, abusive relationships, and our slow supplication to corruption. She sees it, she deals it. If she's feeling generous, she’ll spit on her hand first.
What does this all mean for a reader? One vicious book-hangover. Scenes displayed so vividly, they won’t leave you be. The sense that you have learned more about the depths of humanity than you ever signed up for. That everyone should lose their virginity like that. An irresistible urge to preorder the second book. Too much quivering anticipation to open said second book. The knowledge that you have inadvertently stumbled upon literary brilliance in the pages of a queer, poo filled, indie, torturous, dystopian horror, and that you cannot wait to subject your friends to.
“Oh, shut up, and allow me this morsel of sentimentality. I gave you your blood, your sex, and your poop jokes. Give me this one shred of optimism.” – Rune, Edge Of The Breach
We will, Rune. We will.
Until next time,
Riv ♡
Riv RainsThis is going to get intense. Buddy up and pick a safe word. Shall we?
Reviewed in Australia on November 2, 2021
"Progeny of rape. Heir to violence. Drunk with power. Forged from fire. The sun-made child. Sometimes, I wish to be ordinary. It would be easier if I was normal. Easier, but far less fun." – Kyder, Edge Of The Breach
Welcome to The Breach—a dystopian dark fantasy licking blood from the walls of humanity. Two main characters; two alternating first person points of view. Two very different coming of age stories and a narrative so thick with talent my jaw hurts from chewing it.
"I feel pain. Only pain. It washes away the rest — the depression and the anxiety, the tics and the obsessions, the dark and the light — until I am gray as the land baptized in moonlight." – Kyder, Edge Of The Breach
Kyder, Kyder, Kyder. He gives readers everything. Surging empathy, staggering up-chuck reflex, that sly smile we save in a secret box just for him when he’s charming. It’s all a dance to him. Life’s pains and pleasures—one and the same—literally. This is a great place to discuss trigger warnings, though to be honest, I can’t really think of one that ISN’T included. That might seem troubling, but Scot is the master of making the grimdark palatable—turning gore, gore-geous. Torture, self harm, fear, filthy sex. It’s all there in spades. Hell, don’t bring a spade, you’ll need a damn snow plough!
“The restraints I impose on myself are much more difficult to overcome than the restraints imposed on me by others.” – Rune, Edge Of The Breach
Rune, Rune, Rune! Our quivering heartache. The pure soul, beaten until it shines. This is our other point of view and essentially the essence of humanity so devoid from Kyder. Rune is the reason we can withstand his calculated malice, which Scot knows; switching from one to the other seamlessly, chapter for chapter. She measures just how much staggering brutality we can stomach, then throws open a window to let us breathe with Rune. This clever technique also happens to be the exact reason every reader struggles to set this book down. Each switch is a wrenching, pacing brilliance that left my pillow empty and tea cold. *Shakes fist at Scot*
There’s nothing socially acceptable here, but that’s precisely the point. Scot has written a purge on humanity. Every fear, desire, thirst, disgust—she’s flayed them all raw. Brutal, abrupt descriptions that hang your jaw in awe. As a writer myself, I was constantly stunned by her courage. Page after page of commentary reflecting our own flawed society, blindly determined to go to war with its own tail. She gives me hope; that this industry isn’t going to stamp out its own creative voice. That maybe, just maybe, indie authors of this caliber can save us all from the fetters. So we should all hope.
“Struggle is what makes us grow, but most of us don’t want to grow. We want to shrink back to when there were no questions, concerns, stakes, or responsibilities. We want to shrink back to when we couldn’t f*#k everything up.” – Kyder, Edge Of The Breach (Censored for Amazon by Riv Rains)
If you're not a writer? Edge Of The Breach gives so many a box to stand on. Normalising diversity in sexuality, in race, in torture—wait—let’s not normalise torture just yet! Poo then; she normalises poo. (Is it messed up that I found the poo references almost the hardest to read? Not the torture, the POO! What does that say about me?) She lays out mental illness like a red writhing carpet, takes charge of our perceptions of self harm, neurodiversity, abusive relationships, and our slow supplication to corruption. She sees it, she deals it. If she's feeling generous, she’ll spit on her hand first.
What does this all mean for a reader? One vicious book-hangover. Scenes displayed so vividly, they won’t leave you be. The sense that you have learned more about the depths of humanity than you ever signed up for. That everyone should lose their virginity like that. An irresistible urge to preorder the second book. Too much quivering anticipation to open said second book. The knowledge that you have inadvertently stumbled upon literary brilliance in the pages of a queer, poo filled, indie, torturous, dystopian horror, and that you cannot wait to subject your friends to.
“Oh, shut up, and allow me this morsel of sentimentality. I gave you your blood, your sex, and your poop jokes. Give me this one shred of optimism.” – Rune, Edge Of The Breach
We will, Rune. We will.
Until next time,
Riv ♡
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- SV FiliceReviewed in Canada on December 1, 2021
5.0 out of 5 stars Worth all the hype and screams of terror
Edge of The Breach is not for the faint-hearted. Halo’s details go beyond in rapid sequence, delivering gruesome action and the internal turmoil of power. There were times I had to look away or I’d squirm, but the characters stayed true to their paths and I was so invested in discovering when they would cross.
Ryder and Rune are mirrors of each other in so many ways. In power, love, friendship, and even how they cope with the reminders of their birth families. For two opposing spirits, they fit perfectly to bring the storyline to action. The Roofers are a gang of life and sealed by the bonds they share, while the Appoli are a gang or death and sealed by fear.
Okay, BUT DID HALO MAKE ME CRY? Yes, yes I did cry.
Like I said, Edge of The Breach is not for the faint-hearted. The characters do not ease up for you to feel comfortable and the author does not deter from the plot to avoid conflict. You are thrown in full force and you need to reach the last pages to get out.
A great book, worth all the hype and screams of terror.