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The Master Undone: An Inside Out Novella (Inside Out Series) Kindle Edition

4.4 out of 5 stars 627 ratings

The New York Times bestselling INSIDE OUT series now in development for TV with Marvista Entertainment!

This novella should be read between book three (
Revealing Us) and book four (No In Between)

I told him goodbye, and  I will not call him. I know if I do, it will be my undoing, and I'll once again be caught up in his spell. I will once again be . . . lost. 
 
In her private journals, Rebecca laid bare her soul, revealing her obsession for the one man whose erotic demands captivated her imagination--and enslaved her forever. Now, with Rebecca no longer in his life "he" is lost, questioning everything he thought he knew about himself and about control he holds in such high regard. One woman will reach out to heal him and then turn away, leaving him haunted. She is nothing he thought he wanted and somehow everything he needs. He tells himself to forget her but he cannot escape his desire for her. He has to have more...

Note: The Master Undone is available in print and ebook as part of the novella bundle Rebecca's Lost Journals

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Did you know this series is being developed for cable TV? Be sure to check out lisareneejones.com for more details! READING ORDER - MUST BE READ IN ORDER!Book 1 - IF I WERE YOUBook 2- BEING MEBook 3 - REVEALING USBook 3.1 - HIS SECRETSBooks 3.2 & 3.3 - REBECCA'S LOST JOURNALS *NOTE This bundle include The Master Undone*Book 3.3 - THE MASTER UNDONEBook 3.4 - MY HUNGERBook 4 - NO IN BETWEENBook 4.5 - MY CONTROLBook 5 - I BELONG TO YOUBook 6 - ALL OF MECARELESS WHISPER - spinoff series about Ella from INSIDE OUT - book 1 out in Nov. 2015

Product details

  • ASIN ‏ : ‎ B00AYIDVLS
  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ Pocket Star
  • Accessibility ‏ : ‎ Learn more
  • Publication date ‏ : ‎ August 12, 2013
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • File size ‏ : ‎ 3.5 MB
  • Screen Reader ‏ : ‎ Supported
  • Enhanced typesetting ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • X-Ray ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Word Wise ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Print length ‏ : ‎ 63 pages
  • ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-1476738512
  • Page Flip ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Customer Reviews:
    4.4 out of 5 stars 627 ratings

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Lisa Renee Jones
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New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Lisa Renee Jones writes dark, edgy fiction. Lisa writes romance under Lisa Renee Jones and thrillers under both Lisa Renee Jones and LR Jones. Lisa lives in Colorado with her husband, a cat that talks too much, and a Golden Retriever who is afraid of trash bags.

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Customers find the novella engaging and appreciate the writer's outstanding job with Mark's point of view. Moreover, they value the character development, with one customer noting it provides a deeper understanding of the master's demons. Additionally, the book receives positive feedback for its erotic content, pacing, and intelligence, with one review highlighting how it gives Mark a human side. However, the novella's short length receives mixed reactions from customers.

73 customers mention "Readability"71 positive2 negative

Customers find the book to be an interesting read and appreciate how it adds to the series, with one customer particularly enjoying reading from Mark's perspective.

"...While she is a good writer and has interesting material, she ALWAYS leaves you hanging...." Read more

"...Having Crystal strip him of his control made for an interesting read, but sort of left me confused...." Read more

"...As I have stated before, the companion novellas do a nice job of adding to the series, and "The Master Undone" is no exception." Read more

"...This is a novella, so a quick enjoyable read!! Lisa, as always job well done, well written with a great story ( so much information)!!!!!..." Read more

35 customers mention "Suspense"31 positive4 negative

Customers enjoy the suspense of the book, finding the story engaging and pulling them in, with one customer noting it's a welcome change from longer stories.

"...It's like we could finally see the real Mark. It was amazingly haunting to watch...." Read more

"...What happens next is predictable yet fulfilling. Read this book! I had it devoured in about an hour!" Read more

"...Ohhh he has met his match and this is hot!!..." Read more

"...This is a novella, so a quick enjoyable read!! Lisa, as always job well done, well written with a great story ( so much information)!!!!!..." Read more

17 customers mention "Character development"17 positive0 negative

Customers appreciate the character development in the novella, with one review noting how it provides a great glimpse into The Master's life, while another mentions how it gives insight into a silent character.

"...This makes him human, thus leaving him fighting with himself over his new found emotions...." Read more

"...I loved being inside his head and learning his thought processes and getting some hints to the many secrets he keeps...." Read more

"...I admit it does shed a little more light on the story and brings a different point of view...." Read more

"...She was very likeable and her personality and attitude was pretty awesome. Mark was truly something else. Getting into his head was cool...." Read more

14 customers mention "Writer"14 positive0 negative

Customers praise the author's writing, particularly their outstanding job with Mark's point of view.

"...While she is a good writer and has interesting material, she ALWAYS leaves you hanging...." Read more

"...Lisa, as always job well done, well written with a great story ( so much information)!!!!!..." Read more

"...The only reason I read this was because Lisa is such an amazing author, otherwise, I'd have passed it up. I'm SO happy I chose to read this...." Read more

"...This book was AWESOME! It was well written from Mark's point of view...." Read more

10 customers mention "Erotic content"10 positive0 negative

Customers enjoy the erotic content of the book, with one review highlighting the beautiful scenes and another mentioning the very dark side of BDSM.

"...clues for the series readers but stands alone as its own exciting erotic story." Read more

"...He is flustered, off-balance, and it's a sexy read. This novella gives Mark a human side, less 'know-it-all' Master and art gallery owner...." Read more

"...The books bring in mystery, suspense and beautiful scenes. I was a little disappointed only because it was so short...." Read more

"There is something about Mark aka Mr. Compton that makes him super sexy and interesting. I really love this side of Mark...." Read more

9 customers mention "Pacing"9 positive0 negative

Customers appreciate the pacing of the book, with one mentioning it provides a deeper look at Mark's character, while another notes how it gives him a human side.

"...The chemistry between them is more than just hot sex; they are drawn on a deeper level and you can tell that almost instantly. Ah!..." Read more

"...While she is a good writer and has interesting material, she ALWAYS leaves you hanging...." Read more

"Master Undone is very hot male spicy and very in detail of who Mark Compton is and the pain he feels at the loss of His submissive and misses..." Read more

"...This novella gives Mark a human side, less 'know-it-all' Master and art gallery owner...." Read more

7 customers mention "Intelligence"7 positive0 negative

Customers appreciate the intelligence of the book, with one review highlighting the author's brilliance and another noting how it provides insight into Rebecca's character.

"...Lisa Renee Jones is brilliant and anyone who enjoyed the other two books in this magical trilogy will surely fall in love with MASTER UNDONE as..." Read more

"...She's a strong, intelligent woman who also likes to be in control. I loved that she challenges Mark in a way that no woman ever has...." Read more

"...Mark might just have met his match with Crystal. She's smart, confidante, sexy & cool as a cucumber... yup I can't wait for more of this couple...." Read more

"This book gave me some answer about Rebecca. I loved this book and the complete series. Best series ever...." Read more

13 customers mention "Shortness"5 positive8 negative

Customers have mixed opinions about the length of the book.

"...I was a little disappointed only because it was so short. I am dying for her next book and I am so happy to have stumbled upon her...." Read more

"...They are all very short and only take a few minutes to read." Read more

"...It was nice to see this side of Mark. It was very short but very sweet. I read it in one night! This is another one of Lisa's masterpieces...." Read more

"Very short but still good. Almost there and still can't stop. I must confess this is better than fifty shades." Read more

Top reviews from the United States

  • Reviewed in the United States on August 20, 2013
    ARC Review of Master undone ~ SPOILERS!! You may not want to read this if you haven't read Being Me.
    This is from Lisa's website!
    I told him goodbye, and I will not call him. I know if I do, it will be my undoing, and I'll once again be caught up in his spell. I will once again be . . . lost.
In her private journals, Rebecca laid bare her soul, revealing her obsession for the one man whose erotic demands captivated her imagination-and enslaved her forever. Now, with Rebecca no longer in his life "he" is lost, questioning everything he thought he knew about himself and about the control he holds in such high regard. One woman will reach out to heal him and then turn away, leaving him haunted . She is nothing he thought he wanted and somehow everything he needs. He tells himself to forget her but he cannot escape his desire for her. He has to have more...
    
Master Undone takes place a day after Being Me and is in Marks point of view.
After I finished Bring Me I was really hoping to hear more from Mark! Lisa knows what her readers want and we do!! We see a whole new side to Mark. I loved being in his head, seeing that there is more to the Dominate Master we have come to love! He is just as messed up as any of them. He is in so much pain and has so much guilt over the loss of Rebecca. He cared for her and I think he wanted to love her.That is what makes it harder for him because she was so in love with him she was willing to do anything for him, but he is tormented by something that he feels he is not capable of love. He uses his role as master to keep women at arm's length and for control. Then he meets one women that will be the complete opposite of what he wants or needs. He is in New York on an Urgent family matter and is thrown when he meets Crystal Smith. She is Independent and outspoken. The complete opposite from his subs. Is she what he needs to heal his broken spirit? He has never felt so out of control in his life. She will take our Dominate Master on a roller coaster ride of emotions and leave him speechless! An alpha female for our ultimate alpha male. I really hope their will be more to Mark and Crystal's story!!
  • Reviewed in the United States on August 12, 2013
    THE MASTER UNDONE is the fifth novella in Lisa Renee Jones Inside Out Novellas and told from the `Masters' POV. Do not read before Being Me, as it contains a major spoiler.

    Mark Compton has had 2 major blows in his life in the last 24 hours. First he found out that his submissive, and someone he allowed himself to get really close to, was killed at the hands of her replacement. And now, he's just been told that his mother has stage 3 breast cancer and needs a double mastectomy. With his personal life in turmoil, Mark will discover a feisty, independent female, a woman whom his mother respects and trusts, in the guise of one Crystal Smith.

    Good intentions are all very well in theory; reality is often very different. When Mark meets Crystal Smith who works for Riptide in New York he finds himself dealing with reactions and emotions that are quite new to him.

    Crystal Smith is the complete opposite of the sort of woman Mark usually finds himself attracted to; blond, assertive, independent and without a submissive bone in her body, she shouldn't affect him at all. And yet:

    "She's everything I don't like in a woman, and yet I can't take my eyes of her."

    Chris has also spoken to Mark and let him know that he "Would walk through Hell with him right now" as he deals with his mother's illness. Will this help start to mend the rift between two friends. Will Mark learn to relinquish the tight control he has to have over everyone. This book helps you to realize that Mark is human after all. I can NOT wait for Revealing Us as after that it is my understanding that Mark will have his full length story. I am very much looking forward to that.

    READING ORDER:
    1. If I Were You (Inside Out #1)
    2. Rebecca's Lost Journals (Novellas)
    - The Seduction
    - The Contract
    - His Submissive
    - My Master
    3. Being Me
    4. Behind Closed Doors (online serial novellas)
    5. The Master Undone (novella) (August 2013)
    6. Revealing Us (September 2013)

    I received an ARC copy of this book from Pocket in exchange of an honest review.

    Connection to The Inside Out Trilogy that has recently been optioned to STARZ for TV with Suzanne Todd (Alice in Wonderland w/Johnny Depp) producing and includes exciting clues for the series readers but stands alone as its own exciting erotic story.
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Top reviews from other countries

  • Kellyst79
    5.0 out of 5 stars Great short story
    Reviewed in the United Kingdom on September 4, 2021
    For a short book it give a great insight into Mark and I love this side of him. Can’t wait to read the next one
  • Andy
    5.0 out of 5 stars POV from the master !
    Reviewed in Canada on November 21, 2013
    I always love a story told from the male POV, and in this one it's really nice to see how mark is really falling for rebecca and what's going on in his mind...
  • Kindle Customer
    5.0 out of 5 stars good quick read
    Reviewed in the United Kingdom on December 24, 2013
    Not a great in depth book. However it was an enjoyable read and the characters were well written considering it is a novella.

    The book is a good look at how a master becomes undone in his quest to be in control ALWAYS. The run in with his employee and her outlook to him and his ways soon has him at his knees.
  • mitzi
    5.0 out of 5 stars a novella to the the trilogy and Rebeccas journals
    Reviewed in Canada on September 15, 2013
    Amazing storyline . Lisa Renee Jones is an excellent writer, always making you want more. Its so good it will be made into a TV series. I can hardly wait.
  • Luisa andrade
    5.0 out of 5 stars Master story
    Reviewed in Canada on November 19, 2013
    That was great story can't wait for the next book I he that Rebbeca still a live them mark will not know what to do

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