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Writing About Villains: How to Create Compelling Dark Characters for Your Fiction (Writer's Craft Book 5) Kindle Edition

by Rayne Hall (Author) Format: Kindle Edition
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Create fiends whom your readers will love to hate and can never forget.

Forget the cardboard evil-doers with their evil laughter and stinking breath. Your villains will have personality, ideals, feelings and conflicts. They will challenge your heroes, chill your readers, and give your novel excitement and depth.

This book is part of the Writer's Craft Series: Writing Fight Scenes, Writing Scary Scenes, The Word-Loss Diet, Writing About Villains, and more.

Please note: This book assumes that you have some fiction writing experience. You'll benefit most if you've already mastered the basics of the craft and want to learn specialist techniques. It is not recommend for absolute beginners.

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  • ASIN ‏ : ‎ B00BWYEGX0
  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ Rayne Hall (January 7, 2014)
  • Publication date ‏ : ‎ January 7, 2014
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • File size ‏ : ‎ 236 KB
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  • Print length ‏ : ‎ 78 pages
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Rayne Hall MA is the author of over 100 books, mostly Dark Fantasy and Gothic Horror, e.g. The Bride’s Curse: Bulgarian Gothic Ghost and Horror Stories. She is also the acclaimed editor of Gothic, Fantasy and Horror anthologies (e.g. Among the Headstones: Creepy Tales from the Graveyard) and author of the bestselling Writer’s Craft series for advanced-level writers, including and the bestselling Writer’s Craft series e.g. Writing Gothic Fiction Writing Scary Scenes, Writing Vivid Settings, Writing Vivid Dialogue, Writing Vivid Characters, Writing Deep Point of View.

Born and raised in Germany, Rayne Hall has lived in China, Mongolia, Nepal and Britain. Now she resides in a village in Bulgaria, where men perform the annual demon dance, ghosts and sirens beckon, and abandoned decaying houses hold memories of a glorious past.

Her lucky black rescue cat Sulu often accompanies her when she explores spooky derelict buildings. He delights in walking across shattered roof tiles, scratching charred timbers and sniffing at long-abandoned hearths. He even senses the presence of ghosts… but that’s another story.

Rayne has worked as an investigative journalist, development aid worker, museum guide, apple picker, tarot reader, adult education teacher, belly dancer, magazine editor, publishing manager and more, and now writes full time.

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Customers find the book helpful for creating villains. They find it informative and useful, with great examples and useful suggestions. The writing is described as concise, easy to read, and well-written.

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Customers find the book helpful for villain development. It explains personality types and archetypes, helping them create more rounded individuals and narrow down their motivations. They mention it opens new vistas to writing villains and helps them flesh out their psyches.

"This book is very helpful in discovering your book's villain. Your villain is there, deep down in the plot, notes, and maps of your own story...." Read more

"...this book to anyone that wants to write an interesting and believable villain." Read more

"...This is a great little book dissecting the types of villains that illuminate what not to do in order to avoid clichés and gives a breakdown of all..." Read more

"...It also helped me create more rounded individuals and narrow down their personality and motivations." Read more

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Customers find the book informative and useful with great examples. They appreciate the smart ideas and suggestions on how to build a villain. The book provides helpful advice and tips, with great examples and explanations.

"I found the book enlightening, it tries to describe some of the most used types of villains used in fiction, and also how to deepen their traits..." Read more

"...times while running through your story, but besides that it's an excellent book. I highly recommend. Good luck to all you writers out there...." Read more

"...It was an easy and informative read...." Read more

"...Again, another great book that helps authors craft their stories. Rayne manages to capture what you need without being verbose...." Read more

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Customers find the book easy to read and understand. They appreciate the concise writing style that gets ideas flowing. The book is well-written and perfect for beginning and intermediate writers. It includes useful exercises to help improve writing.

"...It should also be interesting for readers. If you read a lot of books this book reveals many of the tricks used in those books...." Read more

"...If you're like me then you need a hard copy to work with, it's easier to add notes and to walk around with when you are rehearsing a scene...." Read more

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  • Rune_1975
    5.0 out of 5 stars Enlightening read about villains in fiction.
    Reviewed in the United States on December 21, 2013
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    I found the book enlightening, it tries to describe some of the most used types of villains used in fiction, and also how to deepen their traits making them believable characters.
    The book solidifies things you may have noticed earlier, but have not been able to put your finger on and describe.
    It should also be interesting for readers. If you read a lot of books this book reveals many of the tricks used in those books. I immediately recognized characters from several of the books I have read before. giving me the insight to see what the writer had done to make the character so believable.
    For a writer it will give tips on how to construct a believable villain. You may already be using some of these techniques without knowing, but I found it fun to analyze my own writing with the tips in this book.

    I would recommend this book to you if you want to see how villains can be made from the ground up. Either as a writer or as a reader. I have seen stories out there that could have been improved using techniques from this book.
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  • bellamouse
    4.0 out of 5 stars Helpful for writing a better villain
    Reviewed in the United States on May 19, 2018
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    I found the descriptions and examples helpful, especially the descriptions of how to give the villain depth by making the character complex.
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  • J. Scott
    5.0 out of 5 stars Well worth the read, especially for the price.
    Reviewed in the United States on January 28, 2014
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    This book is very helpful in discovering your book's villain. Your villain is there, deep down in the plot, notes, and maps of your own story. This book helps draw him/her out, all while avoiding some common mistakes and clichés. I really enjoyed this book and it has helped me a lot. I ended up buying all of the Writer's Craft collection because of this one. They are all very well done books, and are the perfect books for beginning and intermediate writers. The only downside was that I was unable to print the book off after I bought it. If you're like me then you need a hard copy to work with, it's easier to add notes and to walk around with when you are rehearsing a scene. You can only drop a tablet so many times while running through your story, but besides that it's an excellent book. I highly recommend. Good luck to all you writers out there. Don't give up. If you don't write it the world will never read it. God bless!
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  • ModernPrometheus0729
    5.0 out of 5 stars A must for anyone who wants to write a believable villain.
    Reviewed in the United States on November 4, 2015
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    I loved Rayne's "Writing About Villains"! I bought this book to help me flesh out the protagonist in my book, and I'm so glad that I did. It was an easy and informative read. Even the parts that didn't specifically relate to what I needed helped me by making me think about different ways I could use that information in another way. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone that wants to write an interesting and believable villain.
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  • Gatsby
    5.0 out of 5 stars Excellent little manual on villains
    Reviewed in the United States on November 17, 2014
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    As I begin a new project, I find myself thinking about my villain. I don't want just a regular bad guy. I want someone truly scary. Scary because he's actually lovable and inside he's dealing with his own issues and I want some part of my reader to be rooting for him in some small way. Ultimately, he will go too far as his flaws deepen, but I want my protagonist to struggle with him in the worst way.

    No evil cackling laughs.

    No stenchy breath, breathing down her neck.

    No evil madman that's evil just for the sake of being evil.

    So I went to the old trusted Amazon and found "Writing About Villains" by Rayne Hall.

    I devoured this thing in about two hours. It would have been faster, but I was too busy taking notes. This is a great little book dissecting the types of villains that illuminate what not to do in order to avoid clichés and gives a breakdown of all the notorious types of antagonists. Throughout reading, I was able to develop my villain (at least in brain-storming stage) and I know exactly what I want to do...for the most part. I am struggling a bit with how I'm going to keep my bad guy charismatic while giving him the embodiment of Smother Mother (yes, he's male :)

    You see, I write dystopian and I'm tired of the bad guy being the head of some evil government. I'm working on a new project that hopefully will break the stereotypes of dystopian and give a whole new spin on villains.

    I would recommend this book to anyone who is having trouble fleshing out their bad guys.
    6 people found this helpful
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  • OceansBlu77
    4.0 out of 5 stars very helpful
    Reviewed in the United States on September 5, 2023
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    This helped me exactly the way I needed, I just wish it was a little longer. Overall, I’m happy with it.
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  • Melissa AKA LoneCreatureTM
    5.0 out of 5 stars Need help to create awesome villains? This is worth buying
    Reviewed in the United States on February 4, 2016
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    I'm behind in my reviews so I'm doing some quickies

    Again, another great book that helps authors craft their stories. Rayne manages to capture what you need without being verbose.

    Rayne doesn't just offer tips and tricks, with great examples and explanations, but tries to make you think as well. For example, she talks about "hands" and how you can control pace and increase tension just by focusing on a villain's hands/claws.

    Finally, there are assignments to help you really think about the section you read and how you might apply them to your story.
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  • Angelo
    5.0 out of 5 stars Learned a lot
    Reviewed in the United States on July 28, 2022
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    Very informative book with great examples. I love when people make thugs simple. Well done. Any author would benefit from this.
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  • JuleM
    1.0 out of 5 stars Enttäuschend
    Reviewed in Germany on February 15, 2018
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    Ein dünnes Heftchen mit Tipps wie aus einem drittklassigen Anfängerschreibkurs. Eigentlich widerstrebt es mir so eine schlechte Bewertung abzugeben, aber das war wirklich zu viel Geld für nichts.
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    5.0 out of 5 stars Five Stars
    Reviewed in Australia on March 5, 2017
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  • MCG
    5.0 out of 5 stars WRITING ABOUT THE VILLAINS
    Reviewed in France on September 15, 2014
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    Super conseils, super livre pour peaufiner son personnage. Je recommande ce livre à tous les écrivains perfectionnistes
    cherchant à créer des oeuvre de qualité.
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  • SCrawford
    5.0 out of 5 stars Great, simple, easy read!
    Reviewed in the United Kingdom on January 26, 2014
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    For any of your aspiring or struggling writers, this is the book for you (amongst Rayne Hall's other works). I am a published author, with one novel out (No Secrets: Eternity Series; available on Amazon also) at only 18, but I knew my next book needed to step up. I'm now seeking books and other materials to help improve my writing, characters and plot to be as deep as I'm envisioning it in my head. Rayne Hall provides an array of truly useful information about villains, considering elements you may not have considered before or things you didn't realise you were doing and how you could expand upon them. As a slow reader, and a poor one, I loved this book! It helped me without confusing me or shoving a lot of junk down my throat! I already knew who my villains were because of the complexity of my sequel (having various PoV characters) I was finding it hard establishing the villains and how they fit it. Each villain needed to be real from each PoV and this book helped with that! Thanks Rayne Hall.
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  • Top Hat
    4.0 out of 5 stars Hall provides 20 criteria to compare your bad guy against and sharpen them up
    Reviewed in Canada on December 25, 2016
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    Protagonists need an equally well written and believable antagonist, Ms. Hall provides 20 criteria to compare your bad guy against and sharpen them up. If you've struggled with how to write a good bad guy, her text will assist you in achieving your goal.
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