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Commander's Slave: A Dark Sci-Fi Romance (Kall Alien Warriors Book 2) Kindle Edition

by Sue Lyndon (Author) Format: Kindle Edition
4.4 out of 5 stars 178 ratings
She's given to a savage alien warrior...

Sentenced to a lifetime of slavery on the Kall homeworld, First Daughter Betsy Carson expects the rest of her days to be a constant struggle for survival. She's stunned when a wiseman purchases her from the auction block as a gift for his younger brother - a savage Kall warrior named Edek who loathes humans with his every breath. Her hopes to be left alone by her new master are dashed when he orders her to sleep in his bed, and she soon discovers disobedience will be met with firm consequences.

The little human consumes his thoughts...

Commander Edek is still grieving the loss of his wife and sons. He blames humans for the accident that stole his family, and he shouldn't feel such an intense attraction to the little human slave his brother has thrust upon him. Though he tries to build up walls around his heart, Betsy's sweet presence gradually calms the storm raging within, and he becomes fiercely possessive of the small female. But can a Kall commander and a human slave share a future that doesn't end in tragedy?

Publisher's Note: Commander's Slave is a novel length re-release of a novella by the same name that was first published in 2014. This version has been significantly lengthened and re-edited.
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    Kall Alien Warriors
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  5. Publication date
    March 9, 2021
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  • ASIN ‏ : ‎ B08W3MMDXM
  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ Sue Lyndon
  • Accessibility ‏ : ‎ Learn more
  • Publication date ‏ : ‎ March 9, 2021
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • File size ‏ : ‎ 658 KB
  • Screen Reader ‏ : ‎ Supported
  • Enhanced typesetting ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • X-Ray ‏ : ‎ Not Enabled
  • Word Wise ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Print length ‏ : ‎ 238 pages
  • Page Flip ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Book 2 of 3 ‏ : ‎ Kall Alien Warriors
  • Customer Reviews:
    4.4 out of 5 stars 178 ratings

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Sue Lyndon

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USA TODAY BESTSELLING AUTHOR SUE LYNDON writes naughty, heartfelt romance filled with sexy discipline, breathless surrender, and scorching hot passion. Hard alpha males, strict husbands, fierce alien warriors, and stern daddy-doms make her go weak in the knees. She’s a #1 Amazon bestseller in multiple categories, including Sci-Fi Romance, Historical Romance, BDSM Erotica, and Fantasy Romance. She also writes vanilla sci-fi romance under the name Sue Mercury—but no matter the genre or pen name, her books always have a swoon-worthy happily ever after.

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Customers praise the book's story quality, with one review noting how it continues onto the Kall homeworld and incorporates dark elements. The character development receives positive feedback from multiple customers.

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Customers enjoy the story quality of the book, with one review highlighting its heartwarming love story and another noting its dark elements.

"...Edek grew and changed as the story progressed. I loved Draken he was so kind and considerate and i am glad to see that he will be getting his happy..." Read more

"I really enjoyed the characters in this story. Their story began in fear and turned into so much more. Great character development." Read more

"...With angst, intrigue, and sizzle, Sue Lyndon excels at world building and character-driven storylines to satisfy her readers and leaving us..." Read more

"...That being said I think there were more dark elements in this story and I felt these characters had more emotional pull." Read more

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Customers appreciate the character development in the book.

"...romance was slow burning and believable and H and h were so beautifully drawn characters that you can't help but root for them...." Read more

"I really enjoyed the characters in this story. Their story began in fear and turned into so much more. Great character development." Read more

"...and sizzle, Sue Lyndon excels at world building and character-driven storylines to satisfy her readers and leaving us anxiously looking forward to..." Read more

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  • Dr. Rochester
    5.0 out of 5 stars It packs heat but is also incredibly thoughtful, heartwarming love story
    Reviewed in the United States on April 11, 2021
    Format: KindleVerified Purchase
    This book was a nice surprise. I expected a typical steamy romance novel but this book is actually much more than that. The development of romance was slow burning and believable and H and h were so beautifully drawn characters that you can't help but root for them. I really liked their story and I'm so glad they got their HEA.
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  • JodyL
    4.0 out of 5 stars Kall homeworld
    Reviewed in the United States on April 28, 2021
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    I like that the story continued onto the Kall homeworld.
    Betsy gets sent to Kall as a slave for her punishment. She is bought by a sweetheart named Draken. He bought her for his brother in order to save her even though he doesn't believe in slavery.
    Edek hates humans because his wife and sons died because of them. So things aren't great when these two meet.
    I have to say that I really didn't care for Betsy. In my opinion she was very self centered. She blamed her father for a lot of stuff that she herself was the reason they happened. She should also realize the position she placed him in with her antics.
    Edek grew and changed as the story progressed. I loved Draken he was so kind and considerate and i am glad to see that he will be getting his happy ever after too.
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  • Chrisette
    5.0 out of 5 stars Bride price for the liss to the Kall
    Reviewed in the United States on March 5, 2022
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    Betsy, the American president's daughter flees from having to marry one of the Kall generals as a bride price for the defeat in war. She is captured and sentenced to life as a slave on Kali for running. Will she ever find happiness or return to Earth ?
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  • Tracy Blevins
    5.0 out of 5 stars Excellent storyteller
    Reviewed in the United States on March 11, 2021
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    I really enjoyed the characters in this story. Their story began in fear and turned into so much more. Great character development.
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  • Sue B
    5.0 out of 5 stars A marvellous second book in this splendid series, totally captivating
    Reviewed in the United States on March 9, 2021
    Format: Kindle
    Betsy has been caught and then tried on earth for a false accusation as it cannot be known that the original Betsy Carson the President of the USA’s daughter had never married the proud and well respected Kall warrior but had in fact absconded and a look-a-like had taken her place.
    Betsy is sentenced to spend the rest of her life as a slave on the Kall’s home planet where she is to be sold to the highest bidder, her life will be one of servitude and punishment under her new Master who will be able to use her for whatever he wants until the day she takes her last breath.
    Draken had purchased the human female on the auction block to save her from the other Kall who he knew would have cruelly treated her, as he was not able to actually own a slave, he purchased her and put her under his brother’s name knowing Edak would not be able to turn down his gift without causing great dis-respect to his older brother.
    Edak hated humans after they had been the cause of his wife and twin sons death and the terrible injuries his brother had received in the explosions and whilst trying to save them, he had not enemy might think twice prior to attacking their great army ought on earth but now was responsible for the training of over five hundred warriors on their home planet to ensure any.
    As Edak and Betsy spend time together he realises that his slave is hiding her identity and also why she has been arrested and sentenced to a life as a slave, the feelings between them has grown and he realises that he has feelings for her and Betsy knows that she has found her true home with Edak and his brother who has become a firm and loyal caring friend.
    This is a truly wonderful read there is lots of action and a great twist in the story however, I do not wish to spoil the story so will say no more. I am looking very much to the next book in this series, there are always great characters, a great plot and lots of wonderful human on alien action….
    I voluntarily received and review an Advanced Reader Copy
    I thoroughly enjoyed the book and look forward to reading any future publications; keep up all the great writing.
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  • Sue T.
    4.0 out of 5 stars Good read
    Reviewed in the United States on March 11, 2021
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    While Betsy came off as a spoiled brat in a previous book, the author made a believable progression of her character through this book that made for an enjoyable read. With angst, intrigue, and sizzle, Sue Lyndon excels at world building and character-driven storylines to satisfy her readers and leaving us anxiously looking forward to where she will take us next.
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  • kazza
    3.0 out of 5 stars Just ok
    Reviewed in the United States on December 6, 2021
    Format: Kindle
    I found this book was just ok.
    It didn’t really grab my attention there
    was something missing it could of been the
    female characters that I found annoying.
    I voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book via Booksprout.
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  • Bamf
    5.0 out of 5 stars Memorable and Deeply Felt
    Reviewed in the United States on March 16, 2021
    Format: Kindle
    You get the feeling Betsy wasn't really a full person before she ran away from this political marriage. She was always watched, always criticized, and had only one personal connection in her entire life. She doesn't have time to get any since of self-hood before she goes through one traumatic episode after another: seeing countless episodes of horrific violence, abandoning everything she's ever known and going into hiding, nearly freezing to death, living in the refugee camps - and that's before she's even caught.

    I always have a soft spot of characters dealing with trauma, since I'm one of them myself. Betsy's fear could be felt in the pit of my stomach, her disappointments felt like my own, and her loneliness felt like second nature. She clings to the first decent individual she encounters, and thanks to him, starts to find some semblance of life where she was supposed to face only misery. The emotions are felt strongly, even the little disappointments that she shrugs off leave a mark.

    Edek has known a lot of violence, love, and loss. His older brother is all he has left, and he feels isolated. But humans are small and find ways into the slightest of cracks in an alien heart. And his brother Draken is truly a delight to read. He inherently sees worth in those society oppresses, and sees redemption in his violent angry brother. Seriously, I want to wrap him up and take him home with me and give him cookies.

    And the ending is beautiful, as Draken prepares to save even more ladies!
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  • Pat W
    5.0 out of 5 stars Plenty of action throughout
    Reviewed in the United Kingdom on March 9, 2021
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    What a read this turned out to be. She gets sold then brought by this very kind alien only to be given to his brother who hates humans because of whet they did. Outstanding storyline and this book had me hooked with the chemistry.
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  • Kindle Customer
    4.0 out of 5 stars Commanders slave
    Reviewed in the United Kingdom on October 11, 2023
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    I have really enjoyed reading this book and look forward to reading the next in the series keep writing and I will keep reading
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  • Deb J
    4.0 out of 5 stars 4 stars ⭐️
    Reviewed in Australia on March 18, 2021
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    This is one of those soppy little romances, the writing style reminding me much the same as a regency romance. Betsy runs away from an arranged marriage on earth to a krall warrior. When found she is sentenced to life as a slave on the Kralls home planet. There she is brought by a friendly Krall, as a gift for his brother.
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