I just finished this book and boy is it a good one. I stumbled upon it by complete accident and I’m a fan of the LITRPG The Series I’m a fan of the progressive genre as well. I’m also a critic of books like this. I go hard if they’re good but I’ll let them know if they’re bad. This one was a great book.
The story absolutely fantastic. You could piece it all together. The opening I haven’t had someone actually try and nail an opening for a series in a long time not only did the author try and give you a good opening something. Besides, I got hit by a car and woke up at a New World. They actually nailed the landing. This was a good book. Do you understand why the MC is doing what he’s doing And you cheer him on. Now I have to say something this book isn’t perfect and I don’t think any book is but when you read this book, you will notice issues with presentation. It may be because of translation but it’s an issue with how or when information is present it to you the reader. There were a few times when I felt some information should have been presented earlier in the book. This might’ve been a choice by the author, but there were other times when I felt information just wasn’t clearly conveyed at one particular point but sometime later, you could make sense of it all and figure it out because later you got a better understanding of things. My best example would be suppose you saw someone putting up tile for a bathroom floor do you know you have to stick to a particular pattern so that it looks nice and neat and it’s finished properly what if they just messed up a few pieces of tile nothing that destroyed the floor, but you could tell this is off a little. It still looks beautiful but you can tell that’s not quite right. That’s the feeling I got sometimes reading this book. I’ll give you an example from the book. This really isn’t a spoiler but you’ll understand when you read it. Whenever the MC gets his powers he doesn’t know what’s going on as expected, but he stumbled upon some wording you know a typical status screen of sorts. It’s confusing to the reader when that happens now normally it would be confusing because this person doesn’t understand what’s going on but you get that from the wording in the text he doesn’t know what just happened but you the reader don’t understand what the author is presenting to you as information. You learn later in the book how to interpret this information but it would’ve been great to tell you then, and there how to interpret this information. There’s a grid for skills let’s just call it that it would’ve been great to see that grid early on you. Don’t see it until halfway through the book I believe. You should’ve saw this grid as soon as he acquired his skills because then it made interpreting things much easier for you, Rita. I have no problem with a situation where you don’t know everything and you discover facets of the world you’re reading about but this was a case. Where are you the reader really need it to know what am I reading here? Why am I being presented this information? I don’t understand. You could tell the author wanted you to understand this information. It wasn’t as if they didn’t want you to perceive what they were saying It just wasn’t coming off well
However, I want you to remember this is 5 stars through and through I’m not rounding here. This was a great book. I’m running to read the next book, but I wanted to leave a great review. Too often I see authors who don’t try and explore the world that they are introducing us to. Too often I see authors, who are quick to force us into an adventure without giving us a good reason. The MC is actually doing something. this book doesn’t do that you get everything you want and everything you need out of the progressive LITRPG genre, and he tells a good story.
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